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Like the dead but living,
Without ambitions nor goals,
Along me I walk towards the path of ghouls,
Forever-so I am falling.
©2008-2009 ~yangtz92
:iconyangtz92:

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This is a very old poem I wrote when I was feeling very emo-ish. It follows an "A B B A" format? I don't know... Usually I just free-write.

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:iconburningxstarlight:
'along me' ...idk how I felt about that. Interesting piece. Better than what I could do with formatted. I prefer to free write.
:iconyangtz92:
thanks for comment =] actually first thing i ever submitted on here x_x

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"Boredom is a state of mind, sadly its the state my mind is in."
:iconburningxstarlight:
you should submit more :)
:iconyangtz92:
yeah i plan to when i finish up on some unfinished things i started =]

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"Boredom is a state of mind, sadly its the state my mind is in."

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